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The following chart shows the average number of hours devoted per day to recreation and sports by youth and seniors in the United States in 2015.

The following chart shows the average number of hours devoted per day to recreation and sports by youth and seniors in the United States in 2015. PMOOp
The following chart shows the average number of hours devoted per day to recreation and sports by youth and seniors in the United States in 2015. It is clear that Watching TV was the best activity among both generations in the year 2015. In addition, the biggest difference was in the number of the youngster and elderly people elapsed their time for reading. As can be seen from the chart, while the youngster dominated first place in terms of playing games and using computers, with 1 hour per day, compared with only 0. 5 hours of the 15-19 year-olds generation. The numbers of seniors and youth who spent their time Socializing and communicating were relatively smaller, with 0. 6 hours and 0. 75 hours respectively. It is also noteworthy that sport, exercise, and pastime was the least popular task among both generations, with under 0. 75 hours per day Looking at the chart in more detail, the most popular recreation among the elderly community was watching TV, about 4. 5 hours daily, almost as twice as it is of the young generation. In addition, the number of times used by elderly people was about 1 hour daily, whereas the figure for the young generation was significantly lower with just nearly 0. 1 hours daily. Similarly, the number of times that seniors using on relaxing and thinking per day (about 1 hour) was also higher than that of youth ones (about 0. 1 hours).
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devoted per day to recreation and sports by youth and seniors in the United States in 2015.

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