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The pie graph and the line chart illustrate the proportion of bottles’ sales in five regions and the change of share price of Coca-Cola from 1996 to 2000.

The pie graph and the line chart illustrate the proportion of bottles’ sales in five regions and the change of share price of Coca-Cola from 1996 to 2000. lXRmw
The pie graph and the line chart illustrate the proportion of bottles’ sales in five regions and the change of share price of Coca-Cola from 1996 to 2000. It is clear that the line chart shows the fluctuation of sales prices and the pie chart reveals that North America, Latin America, and Europe accounted for most bottles revenue. North America accounted for the highest percentage of bottles sales which was 30. 4%. The second and the third position was Latin America and Europe which took 25. 7% and 20. 5% of bottles sales respectively. The forth position was Asia which earned 16. 4% of bottles sales. Africa and Middle East had the least rate which was 7%. The price of Coca-Cola fluctuated continiously between 1996 and 2000. From 1996 to 1997, the price of Coca-Cola peaked to $69 then it fell to $55 in the middle of 1997. It kept peaking to $80 in 1998 then dropped to $48 in 2000. After 2000, the price of Coke climbed quickly to $65 then lowered to $53 at the end of 2000.
The pie graph and the line chart illustrate the proportion of
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bottles’
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sales
in five regions and the
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change
of share
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price
of Coca-Cola from 1996 to 2000. It is
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clear
that the line chart
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shows
the fluctuation of
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sales
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prices
and the pie chart reveals that North America, Latin America, and Europe accounted for most
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bottles
revenue.

North America accounted for the highest percentage of
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bottles
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sales
which was 30. 4%. The second and the third position was Latin America and Europe which took 25. 7% and 20. 5% of
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bottles
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sales
respectively
. The forth position was Asia which earned 16. 4% of
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bottles
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sales
. Africa and Middle East had the least rate which was 7%.

The
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price
of Coca-Cola fluctuated
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continiously
between 1996 and 2000. From 1996 to 1997, the
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price
of Coca-Cola peaked to $69 then it fell to $55 in the middle of 1997. It
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kept
peaking to $80 in 1998 then dropped to $48 in 2000. After 2000, the
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price
of Coke climbed
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to $65 then lowered to $53 at the
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end
of 2000.
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IELTS academic The pie graph and the line chart illustrate the proportion of bottles’ sales in five regions and the change of share price of Coca-Cola from 1996 to 2000.

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