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The graph below demonstrates the amount of visitors having trips on island in Caribbean area from 2010 to 2017.

The graph below demonstrates the amount of visitors having trips on island in Caribbean area from 2010 to 2017. kxgaR
The graph below demonstrates the amount of visitors having trips on island in Caribbean area from 2010 to 2017. Overall, total tourists and staying on cruise ships visitors tend to increase. However, in the other hand, staying on island is in the opposite direction. From 2010 to 2016, the total number of visitors rose slightly, from 1 to 2. 5. Then in the period from 2015 to 2016, it stood at about 2. 5, after 2016, soaring to 3. 5. For the number of cruise ships staying visitors, in the first 4 years of the period, it fluctuated with 0. 25 to 0. 5, then moderately climbed until reached at 2 in 2017. In the first year of the period, visitors staying on the island stayed under 1, then minimally grew up in the next 2 years. It stabilized at 1. 5 from 2013 to 2015. However, in 2015, it witnessed a slow dropdown to under 1. 5 in 2016, then grew up in 2017 to 1. 5.
The graph below demonstrates the amount of
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visitors
having trips on island in Caribbean area from 2010 to 2017.

Overall
, total tourists and
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staying
on cruise ships
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visitors
tend to increase.
However
, in the other hand,
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staying
on island is in the opposite direction.

From 2010 to 2016, the total number of
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visitors
rose
slightly
, from 1 to 2. 5. Then in the period from 2015 to 2016, it stood at about 2. 5, after 2016, soaring to 3. 5. For the number of cruise ships
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staying
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visitors
, in the
first
4 years of the period, it fluctuated with 0. 25 to 0. 5, then
moderately
climbed until reached at 2 in 2017.

In the
first
year of the period,
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visitors
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staying
on the island stayed under 1, then
minimally
grew up in the
next
2 years. It stabilized at 1. 5 from 2013 to 2015.
However
, in 2015, it witnessed a slow dropdown to under 1. 5 in 2016, then grew up in 2017 to 1. 5.
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IELTS academic The graph below demonstrates the amount of visitors having trips on island in Caribbean area from 2010 to 2017.

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