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The chart gives data about the differences in the annual number of men and women of three age groups who suffer from heart attacks in the USA. It is clear that as people grow older, the risk for heart attack increases; and it can also be seen from the chart that heart attacks often happen to men rather than women. At the age of 29 to 44, 123 thousand female patients have heart attacks, while the figure for women is only 3 thousand. Remarkably, from 45 to 64 years old, there are 424 thousand men who undergo heart attacks and 136 thousand was the number of women suffering from the same medical situation. 440 thousand men are recorded to have heart attacks when they reach 65 or higher while the figure for women of the same age is only 374 thousand.

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