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The pie diagram illustrates that percendaya of it visit by different kinds of patients to the physician in the united State in 2005.

The pie diagram illustrates that percendaya of it visit by different kinds of patients to the physician in the united State in 2005. m2G7O
1. The pie diagram illustrates that percendaya of it visit by different kinds of patients to the physician in the united State in 2005. First of all mostly patients were come to physician about many of other purposes which was twenty nine point two percendage that was more than one fourth of the former. Patients who belonged to Greneral and family madicine category were also too much that accounted for 22. 4% that was also second most patient type. . On the contrary, Internal madicine and prediatries belonging patients were respectively 17. 4% and 13. 4% in 2005. During Same period, patients visit least to physicans which belonged to obstetic and gynecology, opbth. , Ortho. surgery, they ware less than one quarter of the former. To Sum up. It can be seen that there were Mare patients who belonged to orth surgery catagory.
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visit least to
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IELTS academic The pie diagram illustrates that percendaya of it visit by different kinds of patients to the physician in the united State in 2005.

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