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The given diagram illustrates ceramic pots production

The given diagram illustrates ceramic pots production BMG1a

The given pictorial diagram explains the way in which clay utensils are made. Overall, the process consists of several stages, beginning with the digging of raw material and ending up with the finished pots. First of all, the basic material is digged and transported by a container to the factory. After that the staple material is crushed. Then crushed mass is mixed with water for moulding procedure. In the next stage, the moulds are kept to dry for 4 - 6 hours. After this, from dried moulds the ceramic pots are assembled. Following this, clay vessels are transferred to an oven, where they are heated to a temperature of 1000 degree celcius. Next, those hitted containers are coloured and these coloured utensils are put in a big machine to undergo colour firing. Finally, ceramic pots are produced with all finished work.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 pictorial diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 the way in which clay utensils are made
.

Overall
, the process consists of several stages, beginning with the digging of raw material and ending up with the finished pots.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the basic material is Possible spelling mistake found.riggeddoggeddiggergiggedjiggedwigged
digged
 and transported by a container to the factory. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that the staple material is crushed
. Then crushed mass is mixed
 with water for Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
 procedure. In the next
 stage, the Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 to dry for Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.4 – 64–6
4 - 6
 hours. After this, from dried Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
 the ceramic pots are assembled
.

Following this, clay vessels are transferred
 to an oven, where they are heated
 to a temperature of 1000 degree Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
celcius
. Next
, those Possible spelling mistake found.fittedhitterhintedpittedwittedhatted
hitted
 containers are Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 and these Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 utensils are put
 in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 machine to undergo Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 firing. Finally
, ceramic pots are produced
 with all finished work. 