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The vertical column chart depicts the information about the amount of garbage disposal of a country in Europe of the years 2005, 2006 and 2008.

The vertical column chart depicts the information about the amount of garbage disposal of a country in Europe of the years 2005, 2006 and 2008. 6dRe0
The vertical column chart depicts the information about the amount of garbage disposal of a country in Europe of the years 2005, 2006 and 2008. Overall, landfill used to be the primary source for piling the waste in the first two years later dumping in sea became more viable. Burning the waste was lesser than the other methods of disposal in all years. Over the years the rate of landfill declined from 2000 million tons in 2005 to 1200 million tons in 2008 while, dumping the waste in sea had seen a significant surge over 400 million tons starting at 1200 million tons in 2005 and rised slightly morethan 1600 million tons per year in 2008. While, the difference between landfill and dumping in sea was less in 2006 compared to other years. Moreover, burning the waste had seen a rise from 900 million tons to 1200 millions in the year 2005 to 2006 however, it it retained its original position in 2008.
The vertical column chart depicts the information about the amount of garbage disposal of a country in Europe of the years 2005, 2006 and 2008.

Overall
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to be the primary source for piling the
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waste
in the
first
two years later dumping in sea became more viable. Burning the
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waste
was lesser than the other methods of disposal in all years.

Over the years the rate of landfill declined from 2000
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million
tons in 2005 to 1200
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million
tons in 2008 while, dumping the
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waste
in sea had
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seen
a significant surge over 400
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million
tons starting at 1200
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million
tons in 2005 and
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rised
slightly
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morethan
1600
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million
tons per
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year
in 2008. While, the difference between landfill and dumping in sea was less in 2006 compared to other years.

Moreover
, burning the
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waste
had
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seen
a rise from 900
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million
tons to 1200
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millions
in the
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year
2005 to 2006
however
,
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retained its original position in 2008.
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