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The maps depict main changes which have taken place in Youngsville in New Zealand from 1980 to 2005

The maps depict main changes which have taken place in Youngsville in New Zealand from 1980 to 2005 XVBYO
The maps depict main changes which have taken place in Youngsville in New Zealand from 1980 to 2005. Overall, the town had notably shown the development of infrastructure, an increase of skyscrapers and industrial buildings. One change that stand out is that there had been an impressive redevelopment over the whole period. On the west of the city in 1980 there was only railway station but with extending of the place, it is seen that the harbour had been constructed up to 2005. Another thing is river Alanah which was divided 2 parts of the town. The amount of trees and greenery had been much more bigger on the north part in 1980 rather than in 2005. Moreover, the stadium was constructed near this area instead of houses. Additionally, the airport and parking near it were still on their places on the south of Youngsville but at the same time the variety of trees were cut down and replaced by two factories.
The maps depict main
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changes
which have taken place in
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Youngsville
in New Zealand from 1980 to 2005.
Overall
, the town had
notably
shown the development of infrastructure, an increase of skyscrapers and industrial buildings.

One
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change
that stand out is that there had been an impressive redevelopment over the whole period. On the west of the city in 1980 there was
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only
railway station
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but
with extending of the place, it is
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seen
that the
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harbour
had
been constructed
up to 2005. Another thing is river
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Alanah
which
was divided
2 parts of the town. The amount of trees and greenery had been much
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more bigger
on the north part in 1980
rather
than in 2005.
Moreover
, the stadium
was constructed
near this area
instead
of
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houses
.
Additionally
, the airport and parking near it were
still
on their places on the south of
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Youngsville
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but
at the same time the variety of trees were
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cut
down and replaced by two factories.
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IELTS academic The maps depict main changes which have taken place in Youngsville in New Zealand from 1980 to 2005

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