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Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and 1982 ( shown in the picture ). You should write a minimum of 150 words

Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and 1982 ( shown in the picture ). You should write a minimum of 150 words VrkXA
The provided circular chart cast the light on various ways used for communications namely phone, computer, letter in 1962 and 1982. The data is calibrated in fraction. Overall, it is explicit that phone was maximum used by people, however computer was used by less public. Prima facie, it is evident that in 1962, phone was used by more natives, it was noticed at 50%. As well as, 12% masses used letter to communicate. Moreover, computer used was less than both phone and letter. It was noticed at 20% less than letter. Probing further, it is lucid that percentum of phone used in 1982 was more than half. It was reached at 60%. Further, letter used was reduced by half of a phone, it was just 30%. Finally, utilisation of letter in the year of 1982 was seen one - tenth.
The provided circular chart cast the light on various ways
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used
for communications
namely
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phone
, computer,
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letter
in 1962 and 1982. The data
is calibrated
in fraction.

Overall
, it is explicit that
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phone
was maximum
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used
by
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people
,
however
computer was
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used
by less public.

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Prima
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facie
, it is evident that in 1962,
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phone
was
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used
by more natives, it
was noticed
at 50%.
As well
as, 12% masses
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used
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letter
to communicate.
Moreover
, computer
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used
was less than both
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phone
and
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letter
. It
was noticed
at 20% less than letter.

Probing
further
, it is lucid that
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percentum
of
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phone
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used
in 1982 was more than half. It
was reached
at 60%.
Further
,
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letter
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used
was
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reduced
by half of a
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phone
, it was
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just
30%.
Finally
,
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utilisation
of
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letter
in the year of 1982 was
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seen
one
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-
tenth.
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IELTS academic Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and 1982 ( shown in the picture ). You should write a minimum of 150 words

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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