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The pie charts shows the souce of power in different categories from 2003 to 2008.

The pie charts shows the souce of power in different categories from 2003 to 2008. ABR6N
The four pie charts illustate the energy production soure im New Zealand, Mexico, Morroco and Vietnam between 2003 and 2008. Overall, it is noticeable that, nuclear power was major source New Zealand Mexico and Morroco. By Contrast, the maximum source of Vietnam fossil fuel. Looking at the charts in more detail, In New Zealand, 79% energy produced by nuclear while hydro contributed only 2% over the time period. The proportion of fossil fuel was 19% interestingly. In teams of Mexico, nuclear and hydro were essential souce from 2003 to 2008, which were 53% and 35% respectively. Whereas rate of fossil fuel usage was 12% through out the time period of 5 years interestingly. On the other hand, Morroco did not use fossil fuel for energy production as well as the proportion of nuclear fuel was o% in Vietnam. Surprisingly, 70% of energy provide by nuclear fuel and hydro power accounted over a half of energy between 2003 and 2008. There were almost similar ratio of power source between fossil fuel and hydro, which were 51% and 49% considerably.
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New Zealand, Mexico,
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. By Contrast, the maximum source of Vietnam
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. Looking at the charts in more detail, In New Zealand, 79%
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produced by nuclear while hydro contributed
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was 19%
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usage was 12%
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provide by nuclear
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accounted over a half of
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between 2003 and 2008. There were almost similar ratio of power source between
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and hydro, which were 51% and 49%
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