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Chart shows information about audience of radio and television in 1902.

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The line graph depicts the information about audiences of radio and television throughout the day in 1992 in Europe. The data is calibrated in terms of percentages. Overall, the audience of radio illustrates the downward trend and television watched by individuals showed its opposite trend. The audience of television was at a peak during the midnight. The percentage of audience of both entertainment sources was the lowest till 1 a. m. to 5 p. m. Then, proportion of radio prefered individuals rise significantly around 25% in morning and TV watchers starts fluctuating nearly 7%. After that, the percentum shows the slightest decrease about 12% on radio and other side it shows opposite trend and percentage remained under 15% on television watching in the morning. Moreover, percentage of television watching individuals were skyrocketed up to 45% and it was at a peak point at the night-time. Radio watchers were decreasing slowly, in the evening it was under the 15% and it exhibits totally opposite trend in comparison to the percentage of TV. Afterward, in the midnight the audience of television slightly decreased at 17% and on the other hand the percentage of radio was at 7%.
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television
throughout the day in 1992 in Europe. The data
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in terms of percentages.

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, the
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audience
of
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radio
illustrates the downward
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trend
and
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television
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watched
by individuals
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showed
its opposite
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trend
. The
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audience
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television
was at a peak during the midnight.

The
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percentage
of
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audience
of both entertainment sources was the lowest till 1 a. m. to 5 p. m. Then, proportion of
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radio
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prefered
individuals rise
significantly
around 25% in morning and TV watchers
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starts
fluctuating
nearly
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percentum
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shows
the slightest decrease about 12% on
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radio
and other side it
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shows
opposite
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trend
and
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percentage
remained under 15% on
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television
watching in the morning.

Moreover
,
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percentage
of
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television
watching individuals
were skyrocketed
up to 45% and it was at a peak point at the night-time.
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Radio
watchers were decreasing
slowly
, in the evening it was under the 15% and it exhibits
totally
opposite
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trend
in comparison
to the
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of TV. Afterward, in the midnight the
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audience
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slightly
decreased at 17% and
on the other hand
the
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was at 7%.
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