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The pie charts shows the secondary school students in school of uk taking different subjects from1995 to now.

The pie charts shows the secondary school students in school of uk taking different subjects from1995 to now. wBwDN

The pie charts compare the percentum of secondary school scholars in academy of United Kingdom persuing different kind of subjects from 1995 to till now. Taking the charts in more detail, in 1995, the ratio of students taking arts was 15% which experienced a just above twofold fall to 8% in present time. the percentile of geography remain relatively same at just below 25%. On probing further, the students preference for business is exact at 16%. Rs and drama which were parts of education, have vanished from the modern studies. history accounted for 26% which decrease to 25%. in addition, new subject IT is choosed by learners at 27%. Overall, in the starting, history received the highest ratio and RS, drama subjects are converted into IT.

The pie charts compare the Possible spelling mistake found.percent um
percentum
 of secondary school scholars in academy A determiner is probably missing here: "of the United Kingdom".of the United Kingdom
of United Kingdom
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persuing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kind of subjects from 1995 to till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

Taking the charts in more detail, in 1995, the ratio of students taking arts was 15% which experienced a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above twofold fall to 8% in present time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 percentile of geography remain relatively
 same at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below 25%.

On probing further
, the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "students'" or "student's"?students'student's
students
 preference for business is exact at 16%. Rs and drama which were parts of education, have vanished from the modern studies. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHistory
history
 accounted for 26% which decrease to 25%. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 addition, new subject IT is Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "chose", the past tense form of the verb 'choose'?chosechoosechooseschooser
choosed
 by learners at 27%.

Overall
, in the starting, history received the highest ratio and RS, drama subjects are converted
 into IT. 