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Water Usage in australia in the year 2014 and its consumption on daily basis sectors.

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Both pie and bar charts elucidate, the proportions of water consumption and its residential usage in the particular country, Australia in the year 2004. Overall, the majority of water is used by residential people who lives in houses where other sectors consume less comparatively. In the same way, in the daily routine, the wide range of utilization can be observed in the bathroom which is converse to the kitchen usage in the given period of time. At the first glance, in Australia, about 57% of water is utilized by residential houses by outracing every other category. In the contrast, residential apartments' ratio is 13% which is just above the industry and business sectors. Whereas, government and others needed merely 6% and 3% respectively. It is worth noticing that, primarily the predominant use of water on a daily basis can be seen in bathrooms, that is more than a quarter approximately. Secondly, garden consumes almost 26% that is 2 times more water they use in toilet. Significantly, kitchen is the least consumer factor with a difference of about 10% with its necessity in washing clothes, whose ratio is 20% in the year 2004.
Both pie and bar charts elucidate, the proportions of
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consumption and its
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residential
usage in the particular country, Australia in the year 2004.

Overall
, the majority of
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is
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used
by
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residential
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people
who
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lives
in
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houses
where other sectors consume less
comparatively
.
In the same way
, in the daily routine, the wide range of utilization can
be observed
in the bathroom which is converse to the kitchen usage in the
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given
period of time.

At the
first
glance, in Australia, about 57% of
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is utilized
by
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residential
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houses
by outracing every other category. In the contrast,
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residential
apartments' ratio is 13% which is
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just
above the industry and business sectors. Whereas,
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government
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and others
needed
merely
6% and 3%
respectively
.

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primarily
the predominant
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use
of
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water
on a daily basis can be
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seen
in bathrooms,
that is
more than a quarter approximately.
Secondly
, garden consumes almost 26%
that is
2 times more
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water
they
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use
in toilet.
Significantly
, kitchen is the least consumer factor with a difference of about 10% with its necessity in washing clothes, whose ratio is 20% in the year 2004.
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IELTS academic Water Usage in australia in the year 2014 and its consumption on daily basis sectors.

Academic
  American English
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192 words
6.5
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