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The pie charts shows the percentage of global deforestation caused by different activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant.

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The pie chart shows the percentage of global deforestation caused by different activities. Cattle ranches pose a dominant threat to global forests, accounting for over half of the total. The next significant part is small-scale subsistence agriculture, which is responsible for one-third of the deforestation. The 4 remaining factors still pose a threat not so significant to forested areas with a 13% total of the chart. Mining, road construction and dams, as well as logging, account for only 3% each. In contrast to small-scale agriculture, the large-scale part has the least impact on nature by 1% of the total. So what’s left is the other category with 6% contributed to the damaging of forested areas. In conclusion, cattle ranches and agriculture are the main contributors to the causes of the loss of forests, leaving only 12% of the damage to other sources.
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the percentage of global deforestation caused by
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Cattle ranches
pose a dominant threat to global forests, accounting for over half of the total. The
next
significant part is
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small
-scale subsistence agriculture, which is responsible for one-third of the deforestation. The 4 remaining factors
still
pose a threat not
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so
significant to forested areas with a 13% total of the chart. Mining, road construction and dams,
as well
as logging, account for
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only
3% each.
In contrast
to
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small
-scale agriculture, the large-scale part has the least impact on nature by 1% of the total.
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So
what’s
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left
is the other category with 6% contributed to the damaging of forested areas.

In conclusion
, cattle ranches and agriculture are the main contributors to the causes of the loss of forests, leaving
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only
12% of the damage to other sources.

IELTS academic The pie charts shows the percentage of global deforestation caused by different activities.

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