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this chart gives the percentage of people watching these specific countries tv series globally

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The given chart describes the percentage of viewers for various country programs, worldwide. The programs include British, USA, Korean, Indian and Japanese series, watched from the year 2016-2020, let’s compare and contrast the changes that had taken place in the above. British series had the highest number of audience in the year 2016, which is ~ 39%, which later had a fall in 2017 and 2018 which had a percentage of 32% and 19%, later increased to 34% in 2019 and 2020. USA series are the most viewed throughout the years, which had a highest peak in the year 2018 accounting for ~41%. Korean series which was least watched in the year 2016 (~4%), peaked continuously with a fall in the year 2019, yet improved in the year 2020 to (~20%), Indian series and Japanese series however didn’t have much audience throughout, their highest number of viewers were in 2018(~13%) and 2016(~14%) respectively. To conclude, the most watched program is USA series and the least prefered are Japanese and Indian series, when compared to the others across the five years.
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the percentage of viewers for various country programs, worldwide. The programs include British, USA, Korean, Indian and Japanese
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,
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2016-2020,
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that had taken place in the above.

British
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had the highest number of audience in the
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2016, which is ~ 39%, which later had a fall in 2017 and 2018 which had a percentage of 32% and 19%, later increased to 34% in 2019 and 2020. USA
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are the most viewed throughout the years, which had
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2018 accounting for ~41%.

Korean
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which was least
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2016 (~4%), peaked
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2019,
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2020 to (~20%), Indian
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and Japanese
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didn’t have much audience throughout, their highest number of viewers were in 2018(~13%) and 2016(~14%)
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program is USA
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are Japanese and Indian
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, when compared to the others across the five years.
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