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The graph illustrates the percentages of domestic access in the United Kingdom, namely CD player, mobile phone, home computer and internet access between 1996 and 2003. Overall, it is apparent that the trends are upward through the years. Specifically CD player and internet access have the most and least usage, respectively. In 1996/97, about 60% of the population of Britain used a CD player and this figure was up to over 80% in the final year. Similarly, the personal computer showed the same trend and doubled from around 25% to over 50% in 2002/03. Besides, mobile phone’s access had the most significant increase which began at merely under 20% then peaked at 70% despite several fluctuations during the period. In 1998/99, the appearance of the Internet experienced exponential growth in the pattern of residential access to this application. To be specific, access to the Internet held a share of 10% at the beginning and after that, skyrocketed to approximately 50% by the end of the period.
The graph illustrates the percentages of domestic
access
in the United Kingdom,
namely
CD player, mobile phone, home computer and internet
access
between 1996 and 2003.

Overall
, it is apparent that the trends are upward through the years.
Specifically
CD player and internet
access
have the most and least usage,
respectively
.

In 1996/97, about 60% of the population of Britain
used
a CD player and this figure was up to over 80% in the final year.
Similarly
, the personal computer
showed
the same trend and doubled from around 25% to over 50% in 2002/03.

Besides
, mobile phone’s
access
had the most significant increase which began at
merely
under 20% then peaked at 70% despite several fluctuations during the period. In 1998/99, the appearance of the Internet experienced exponential growth in the pattern of residential
access
to this application. To be specific,
access
to the Internet held a share of 10% at the beginning and after that, skyrocketed to approximately 50% by the
end
of the period.
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IELTS academic domestic access in the United Kingdom

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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