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The line graph shows the number of books of four genres lent by a library in 2005 in five different months.

The line graph shows the number of books of four genres lent by a library in 2005 in five different months. 1AKjM
The given line graph depicts the magnitude of books of four genres according to form a library in five distinct months in the 2005 year. Overall, it can be seen that the highest number of books were non-fiction over the others in December, despite this trend having less than a biography's books in January. Whereas the number of books on Sci- Fri was recorded remain less renowned throughout the given time period. In January, the number of books on Biography and Non-friction was the largest number almost 45 and 32 issued from the library, respectively. While the lowest numbers of friction books and Sci- Fri 'books were around 21 and 20. Over the three months, this pattern had augmented by 1 reader in Sci-Fri, roughly 10 numbers in Friction as well as a number of 16 on Non-friction. Albeit the number of books of biography had abated significantly nearly 40 numbers. Having declined these figures in April, the number of book readers had inclined till October. The number of Non-friction books in the library experienced a slight fluctuation throughout the given time period. Over one year, the level of Biography was approximately 48; however, the rate of Non-fiction was witnessed almost 53- a difference of 5 readers. By April, both The range of Sci-Fri books and Friction had up scaled gradually at 31 numbers (Friction) and 21 numbers (Sci-Fi). The number of Friction books had considerably increased at 40 in number. In December, nonetheless, the figure of Sci-Fi had a moderate from 20 to almost 30 in October but in December this trend had lessened by 2 numbers.
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of four genres according to form a library in five distinct months in the 2005 year.

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were non-fiction over the others in December, despite this trend having less than a biography's
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in January. Whereas the
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of
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on Sci- Fri
was recorded
remain less renowned throughout the
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In January, the
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on Biography and Non-friction was the largest
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almost 45 and 32 issued from the library,
respectively
. While the lowest
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of
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friction
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and Sci- Fri 'books were around 21 and 20. Over the three months, this pattern had augmented by 1 reader in Sci-Fri, roughly 10
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in
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Friction
as well
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of 16 on Non-friction. Albeit the
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of biography had abated
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. Having declined these figures in April, the
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readers had inclined till October. The
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of Non-friction
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in the library experienced a slight fluctuation throughout the
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almost 53- a difference of 5 readers.

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had up scaled
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Friction
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had
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