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The map illustrates how Paradise Island has been changed with its infrastructure from past to now.

The map illustrates how Paradise Island has been changed with its infrastructure from past to now. kWy7W
Overall, the infrastructure of Paradise Island has developed and modernized its appearance over time. Furthermore, there are significant differences in its suburban, transport, entertainment centre, etc. In the past, there was a Scientific Research Station(SRS) in the west part of the island, and a little north of SRS, a beach which was forbidden to swim. Pier and an old fashioned boat were south of the beach. Natural spring was a great place for people to relax, and it had many trees. In the north east, rocks completed the style of the island. Nowadays, Paradise Island seems quite different from the past, although some of the same things haven't changed. For instance, rocks are majestic as usual, and the pier is the same with extended parts. Near the rock, scenic lookout is located. Currently, the beach is allowed swimming which is great to entertain. We can notice that Hotel Complex with swimming has been built instead of SRS. In the middle of island, an open restaurant has been opened with BBQ area. Currently, a cafe is working which is related to the open restaurant with cycle path. Cycle path surrounds the island, and it permits to connect many different places without using the car.
Overall
, the infrastructure of Paradise
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Island
has developed and modernized its appearance over time.
Furthermore
, there are significant differences in its suburban, transport, entertainment
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centre
, etc.

In the past, there was a Scientific Research Station(SRS) in the west part of the
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island
, and a
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little
north of SRS, a beach which
was forbidden
to swim. Pier and an
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
old fashioned
boat were south of the beach. Natural spring was a great place for
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people
to relax, and it had
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many
trees. In the
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north east
, rocks completed the style of the island.

Nowadays, Paradise
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Island
seems quite
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different
from the past, although
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some of the
same things haven't
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changed
.
For instance
, rocks are majestic as usual, and the pier is the same with extended parts. Near the rock, scenic lookout
is located
.
Currently
, the beach is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
swimming which is great to entertain. We can notice that Hotel Complex with swimming has
been built
instead
of SRS. In the middle of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
, an open restaurant has
been opened
with BBQ area.
Currently
, a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
is working which
is related
to the open restaurant with cycle path. Cycle path surrounds the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
, and it permits to connect
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
places without using the car.

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