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The pie charts show the proportions of income spent on different areas by young people in the US and those in Czech Republic. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the proportions of income spent on different areas by young people in the US and those in Czech Republic. rabOL
The pie charts provided illustrate the young generation spent their income in the USA and Czech. Overall, all of their earned money are spent on studies, housing, leisure, transport and clothing. The youngs in Czech spent two fifth of their income in studies, while the US young people spent their money on all of the fields counterparts is relatively equal. To be specific, studies is the main purpose of the young people spent money, occupied by 40%, followed by transport, by 23%. Money spent on outfits and leisure are virtually the same, with the former by 11%, the latter by 10%. And then for food and housing, both of them are 8 %. As for the USA, similar to Czech Republic, studies expense still occupied the biggest proportion in the consumer target, but only half of that in Czech, by 20%. Housing stand the second, by 19%, and the money spent on transport, food and leisure are almost identical, by 18%, 17% and 16% respectively. American young generation are spend far more money than the Czech young in housing and food, both of them are the twice more. It also noticeable that people in America are will to spent more in recreation activity. Finally, the proportion of the US young men spent on their attires is merely less than that in Czech, by 10 %.
The pie charts provided illustrate the
young
generation
spent
their income in the USA and Czech.
Overall
, all of their earned
money
are
spent
on
studies
, housing, leisure, transport and clothing. The
youngs
in Czech
spent
two fifth of their income in
studies
, while the US
young
people
spent
their
money
on
all of the
fields counterparts is
relatively
equal.

To be specific,
studies
is the main purpose of the
young
people
spent
money
, occupied by 40%, followed by transport, by 23%.
Money
spent
on outfits and leisure are
virtually
the same, with the former by 11%, the latter by 10%. And then for food and housing, both of them are 8 %.

As for the USA, similar
to Czech Republic
,
studies
expense
still
occupied the biggest proportion in the consumer target,
but
only
half of that in Czech, by 20%. Housing
stand
the second, by 19%, and the
money
spent
on transport, food and leisure are almost identical, by 18%, 17% and 16%
respectively
. American
young
generation are
spend
far more
money
than the Czech
young
in housing and food, both of them are the twice more.
It
also
noticeable that
people
in America are will to
spent
more in recreation activity.
Finally
, the proportion of the US
young
men
spent
on their attires is
merely
less than that in Czech, by 10 %.
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the proportions of income spent on different areas by young people in the US and those in Czech Republic.

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