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Many animals and plants types are known to be vulnerable

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Many animals and plants types are known to be vulnerable and may be disappeared in a short time. If this happeded, the world would suffer signuficantly. Animals and plants are important source for a lot of products such ass wood and wool. Furthermore, they are are very immportant to maintain the ecological balance. If some of them became extinct, others would be dominant and it'ld brought a serious threat. There are many causes for such extension. Firstly, climate changes which mean altration in the surrounding environment of species habitat, which means that tley won't survive and proliferate. In adition, irregulated urban expanssion affects on many of green areas, in tuns many creatures habitat. Also, hunting and forrestration in unallowed areas and against underthreating species is a serous problem. Efforts should be combined to stop this disastor. First of all, harmfull gases and green areas cutting should be limited in order to fight climate changes. Inaddition, urban expanssion should be directed toward free spaces not forests. Finally, hunting and forrestration should be shorten in renwable areas and against reselient species. Earth is our lovely and only home. By saving these creatures we are helping our home to survive. Having green areas will help in relaxing, climate changes as well as providing us whith food and other products. Animals supply us with food and limit harmful creatures which would cause a signifcant damage for humans if they dominated. It's responsipilty for every one to take it serously, and apply avoid it in all aspects of their life.
Many
animals and plants types
are known
to be vulnerable and may
be disappeared
in a short time. If this
happeded
, the world would suffer
signuficantly
. Animals and plants are
important
source for
a lot of
products such ass wood and wool.
Furthermore
, they
are are
very
immportant
to maintain the ecological balance. If
some
of them became extinct, others would be dominant and it'
ld
brought a serious threat.

There are
many
causes for such extension.
Firstly
, climate
changes
which mean
altration
in the surrounding environment of species habitat, which means that
tley
won't survive and proliferate. In
adition
,
irregulated
urban
expanssion
affects on
many
of green
areas
, in tuns
many
creatures
habitat.
Also
, hunting and
forrestration
in
unallowed
areas
and against
underthreating
species is a serous problem.

Efforts should
be combined
to
stop
this
disastor
.
First of all
,
harmfull
gases and green
areas
cutting should
be limited
in order to fight climate
changes
.
Inaddition
, urban
expanssion
should
be directed
toward free spaces not forests.
Finally
, hunting and
forrestration
should be
shorten
in
renwable
areas
and against
reselient
species.

Earth is our lovely and
only
home. By saving these creatures we are helping our home to survive. Having green
areas
will
help
in relaxing, climate
changes
as well
as providing us
whith
food and other products. Animals supply us with food and limit harmful creatures which would cause a
signifcant
damage for humans if they dominated. It's
responsipilty
for every one to take it
serously
, and
apply avoid
it in all aspects of their life.
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