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The line graph illustrates the travel into Uk and from the UK to other places between 1979 to 1999.

The line graph illustrates the travel into Uk and from the UK to other places between 1979 to 1999. xaxKQ
The line graph illustrates the travel into Uk and from the UK to other places between 1979 to 1999. Besides that, the bar graph below gave the information about the most famous nation visited by the Uk citizen in 1999 Overall, it’s clear that the number of visits entered and from the UK significantly increased. It’s also worth noticing that France is a nation that attracts the visitor, whereas Turkey showed the lowest number of travelers. Firstly, there was a significant difference between the number of visits at the beginning when the number of visits abroad by UK residents( 15 million) was higher than visits to the UK by about 5 miilion. Moreover, both visits had gradually gone up time by time; therefore, at the end (1999), it leased a considerable distance between both types of visits when the front was reached over 50 million individuals while the bottom gained under 30 million. Additionally, France was the hottest country attract the visitor in 1999 when had more than 10 million, nearly triple Turkey. On the other hand, Greece and the US were the places that had little difference in travelers around 4 million. Finally, Spain had also become the second hottest place simultaneously, it just a little lesser than France.
The line graph illustrates the travel into
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Uk
and from the UK to other places
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.
Besides
that, the bar graph below gave the information about the most
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famous
nation visited by the
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Uk
citizen in 1999

Overall
, it’s
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clear
that the
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number
of
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visits
entered and from the UK
significantly
increased. It’s
also
worth noticing that France is a nation that attracts the visitor, whereas Turkey
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showed
the lowest
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number
of travelers.

Firstly
, there was a significant difference between the
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number
of
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visits
at the beginning when the
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number
of
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visits
abroad by UK residents
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(
15 million) was higher than
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visits
to the UK by about 5
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miilion
.

Moreover
, both
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visits
had
gradually
gone up time by time;
therefore
, at the
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end
(1999), it leased a considerable distance between both types of
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visits
when the front
was reached
over 50 million individuals while the bottom gained under 30 million.

Additionally
, France was the hottest country attract the visitor in 1999 when had more than 10 million,
nearly
triple Turkey.
On the other hand
, Greece and the US were the places that had
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little
difference in travelers around 4 million.

Finally
, Spain had
also
become the second hottest place
simultaneously
, it
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just
a
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little
lesser than France.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the travel into Uk and from the UK to other places between 1979 to 1999.

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