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The pie charts show the percentage of money a children's charity in the USA spent and received in one year

The pie charts show the percentage of money a children's charity in the USA spent and received in one year QKKdb

The two pie charts compare the number of revenue sources and expenditures for children’s charity in America in a year. Overall, the amount of money from donated food is the highest proportion in revenue resources sector. Similar to donated food, the proportion of program services also accounts for the vast majority of expenditures sector. It is also noticeable that total revenue sources overtake spending. Looking at the different sources of revenue, donated food takes up 86. 6 % of the total number of money a children’s charity received. The figure for community contributions is the second largest revenue source, at 10. 4%. Investment income and government grants are the same (0. 2%) and are the smallest of proportions. The remaining from program revenue and other income makes up for 2. 2% and 0. 4% respectively. Moving forward to expenditures, 95. 8% of money is spent on program services. Turning to the remaining, fundraising consumes 2, 6%, management and general is the lowest proportion, at 1. 6%.

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