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My name is Jack. I am from Canada. I am 23 year old student at university of London. I am freshman there. I have many activities i like, such as: feeding pets, playing football, gathering with friends, and watching movies with my girlfriend. I planning to move to Australia next year. I am going to keep studying there. It is really boring studying IELTS actually. I really do not like that, especially writing part of it is really confucing. But, whatever i will pass it next month and i aimed to get 7 or 7. 5. After taking that, i startbstudying math because my university is required that. Next, i want to study SAT which is really difficult
My name is Jack. I am from Canada. I am 23 year
old
student at
university of London
.
I
am freshman there.
I
have
many
activities
i
like, such as: feeding pets, playing football, gathering with friends, and watching movies with my girlfriend.
I
planning to
move
to Australia
next
year.
I
am going to
keep
studying there. It is
really
boring studying IELTS actually. I
really
do not like that,
especially
writing part of it is
really
confucing
.
But
, whatever
i
will pass it
next
month and
i
aimed to
get
7 or 7. 5. After taking that, i
startbstudying
math
because
my university
is required
that.
Next
,
i
want to study SAT which is
really
difficult
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