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My name is Jack. I am from Canada. I am 23 year old student at university of London. I am freshman there. I have many activities i like, such as: feeding pets, playing football, gathering with friends, and watching movies with my girlfriend. I planning to move to Australia next year. I am going to keep studying there. It is really boring studying IELTS actually. I really do not like that, especially writing part of it is really confucing. But, whatever i will pass it next month and i aimed to get 7 or 7. 5. After taking that, i startbstudying math because my university is required that. Next, i want to study SAT which is really difficult
My name is Jack. I am from Canada. I am 23 year
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1 paragraphs
117 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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