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The map of brll hill farm 1976

The map of brll hill farm 1976 Pkk0J

The given map shows the Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the changes that took place over a period of thirty years. The farm has undergone some significant changes. Overall, it is witnessed that the Bell Hill farm of 1976 underwent a complete transformation and became an Environmental Centre in the year 2006, over a period of three decades. In 1976, there was a farmyard in the centre, which was replaced by a recreational area by 2006. The barn in which corn etc. was stored in 1976 was replaced by a multimedia room in 2006. The storage for farm machinery on the northwest was converted into a car parking area. The farmhouse on the south side was not changed at all. The cow-sheds and poultry area on the east were converted into student housing. The roads on the west were also not altered and remained the same as they were in 1976.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the Bell Hill You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
 in 1976 and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that took

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlace
place
 over a period of thirty years. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
 has undergone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsignificant.significant!significant?significant:significant,significant;
significant


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterChanges
changes
.

Overall
, it is witnessed
 that the Bell Hill You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
 of 1976 underwent a complete

transformation and became an Environmental Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 in the year 2006, over a

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeriod
period
 of three decades.

In 1976, there was a farmyard in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, which was replaced
 by a

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRecreational
recreational
 area by 2006. The barn in which corn etc. was stored
 in 1976 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphwas.was!was?was:was,was;
was


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterReplaced
replaced
 by a multimedia room in 2006. The storage for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
 machinery Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphon.on!on?on:on,on;
on


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 northwest was converted
 into a car parking

area.

The farmhouse on the south side was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 at all. The cow-sheds Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphand.and!and?and:and,and;
and


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPoultry
poultry
 area on the east were converted
 into student housing. The roads Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphon.on!on?on:on,on;
on


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 west were also
 not altered and remained the same as they were in 1976. 