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The following chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the level of water usage in 3 section namely agriculture, industrial and domestic in all around the world, over a period of 20th century, measured in km3

The following chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the level of water usage in 3 section namely agriculture, industrial and domestic in all around the world, over a period of 20th century, measured in km3 N33kb

A glance at the table reveals that, volume of used water in all subjects experiencing a moderate increasing notwithstanding agriculture over used the water sources while domestic usage was less than others. In 1900, world experienced about 5000 km3 uses. It's noticable different in compare with other sectors which was almost zero. There is a sequential climbing until 1950 when agricultural consumption reached to 1000 km3. Over a period of 50 years between 1950 and 2000, the rate of spent water for agricultural aims rocketed and hit a pick by 3000 km3. From 1900 to 1950 the amount of water spent by domestic and industrial, was avoidable. After 1950, industrial uses considerably rose nevertheless domestic usage experienced tedious increasing. In 2000 industrial reached one-third of agricultur while domestic hit a pick by half amount of industrial's rate

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