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The pie charts show the causes of diseases in developing and the developed countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the causes of diseases in developing and the developed countries. QlRG3
The pie charts compare the different kinds of diseases happened between developed nations and developing nations are measured in percentage. Overall, it is clear that the most popular disease in the developing nations is infectous and parasitic disease while most people in the developed nations suffers from other diseases. In the developing nations, infectous and parasitic disease makes up the largest proportion of total four types of diseases at 46 percent, whereas only 1 percent of this disease happens in the developed nations and those also almost doubles the amount of people with heart disease. On the other hand, the figure for other disease accounted for the vast majority in the developed countries at 54 percent, which is six times higher than the percentage of cancer in the developing countries capturing just 9 percent. Furthermore, the heart disease comprises almost the same the total diseases as the cancer does, at 24 percent and 21 percent respectively, there is just 2 percent of other diseases is seen on the lowest portion in the developed countries.
The pie charts compare the
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infectous
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the causes of diseases in developing and the developed countries.

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