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The sales in good in the UK, season 2015

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Illustrated in the given bar chart is the revenue of five distinct kinds of items during four seasons in the year 2015. It is clear from the graph that the turnover earned from clothing, electrical equipment and children’s toys witnessed an upward tendency while the opposite was true for household and garden. Moreover, clothing registered the highest sale out of all the types of goods examined throughout the period. Looking into details, clothing held the first position in trade volumes as opposed to other categories, with the recorded data standing at 100, 000 pounds. In the Fall, this figure then slightly decreased to nearly 70, 000 pounds before rising again and reaching a peak of around 110, 000 pounds in the Winter. A similar trend was seen in the business of electrical equipment, which dwindled from 60, 000 to about 50, 000 and grew to 80, 000 pounds, making it the second best selling type of goods within the same timespan. Moving to other patterns, the deal for children's toys was also increased from roughly 30, 000 pounds in the Spring to 60, 000 pounds after undergoing a fall to 20, 000 pounds in the Summer. On the other hand, the sale of gardens witnessed a decline from nearly 40, 000 pounds to only 20, 000 pounds by the end of this year. Additionally, in spite of the high recording sale in the beginning with 80, 000 pounds, this figure for houldhold then gradually decreased over the timeframe and ended up with the data of a slightly more than 40, 000 pounds.
Illustrated in the
given
bar chart is the revenue of five distinct kinds of items during four seasons in the year 2015. It is
clear
from the graph that the turnover earned from clothing, electrical equipment and children’s toys witnessed an upward tendency while the opposite was true for household and garden.
Moreover
, clothing registered the highest sale out of all the types of
goods
examined throughout the period.

Looking into
details
, clothing held the
first
position in trade volumes as opposed to other categories, with the recorded data standing at 100, 000 pounds. In the Fall, this figure then
slightly
decreased to
nearly
70, 000 pounds
before
rising again and reaching a peak of around 110, 000 pounds in the Winter. A similar trend was
seen
in the business of electrical equipment, which dwindled from 60, 000 to about 50, 000 and grew to 80, 000 pounds, making it the second
best selling
type of
goods
within the same
timespan
.

Moving to other patterns, the deal for children's toys was
also
increased from roughly 30, 000 pounds in the Spring to 60, 000 pounds after undergoing a fall to 20, 000 pounds in the Summer.
On the other hand
, the sale of gardens witnessed a decline from
nearly
40, 000 pounds to
only
20, 000 pounds by the
end
of this year.
Additionally
,
in spite of
the high recording sale in the beginning with 80, 000 pounds, this figure for
houldhold
then
gradually
decreased over the timeframe and ended up with the data of a
slightly
more than 40, 000 pounds.
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