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you have received an invitation to a birthday party

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Dear Thao, Thanks for the information to your birthday party on Wednesday, October 6th. I was really pleased to receive it and I would love to come. It is lucky for me that on the day I will be free and able to go to your party. By the way, I am going to my granmother from Danang last year. It has been such a long time since we have seen each other consequently it will be great to get together and catch up on all the news. Please let me experience if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to help. Maybe with DJ. I want to organize your party's music, if you allow. You perceive, the most well-known DJ in our city is my close friend. Please let me appreciate about my idea. Thanks again, and see you on the 6th. LOVE, Thuy
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Thao
,

Thanks for the information to your birthday party on Wednesday, October 6th. I was
really
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pleased
to receive it and I would
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love
to
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come
. It is lucky for me that on the day I will be free and able to go to your party. By the way, I am going to my
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granmother
from
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Danang
‘last year’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last year
.

It has been such a long time since we have
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seen
each other
consequently
it will be great to
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get
together and catch up on all the news.
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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me experience if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
. Maybe with DJ. I want to organize your party's music, if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
. You perceive, the most well-known DJ in our city is my close friend.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me appreciate about my
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idea
. Thanks again, and
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see
you on the 6th.

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LOVE
,
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Thuy
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IELTS academic you have received an invitation to a birthday party

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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