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These charts illustrate the changes in a road to a new city hospital between 2007 and 2010. According to what is shown it is clearly evident that the parking area for the both staff and public has had devided to a new separate areas where they located in diffrent locations. The public one at the right of the distenatuon while, the employee parking in front of the city hospital. On the other hand, we can see that there is a noticeable elimination and restructur of the hospital road. The bus stop was removed and replaced by a bus station with two round ways at connected with a small access to the station. To sum up, a significant change was happend over the coverd period.
These charts illustrate the
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changes
in a road to a new city hospital between 2007 and 2010.

According to what
is shown
it is
clearly
evident that the parking area for the both staff and public has had
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devided
to a new separate
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areas
where they located in
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diffrent
locations. The public one at the right of the
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distenatuon
while, the employee parking in front of the city hospital.

On the other hand
, we can
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see
that there is a noticeable elimination and
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restructur
of the hospital road. The bus
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stop
was removed
and replaced by a bus station with two round ways at connected with a
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small
access to the station.

To sum up, a significant
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change
was
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happend
over the
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coverd
period.
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IELTS academic Differences between two charts

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  American English
4 paragraphs
124 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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