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The pie charts show electricity generation in Germany and France in 2009 alongside a breakdown of renewable energy. Write a report for a university lecturer summarising the main features.

The pie charts show electricity generation in Germany and France in 2009 alongside a breakdown of renewable energy. Write a report for a university lecturer summarising the main features. Gr6lQ

Tewables have 17. 4 % and Nuclear has 23. 0 % respectively. When it comes to Renewables, we see Biomass has the most parts on this side. It is 39. 3 %. The following thing is Wind. İt is. 36. 9 %. And then, Hydroelectric has 17. 7 %. Solar has 6. 1 %. Geothermal has no share in this section. And it is (560 Billion kWh) France Electricity Generation. All types have 3 main things. One of them is Nuclear, at the same time it has the most shares. Then, Renewables is second place with 13. 7 %. Conventional Thermal has 10. 3 % and it has less portions. Well, Renewables have different portions of things as well. Such as Hydroelectric. It has got 80. 5 % part in this pie chart. The wind has 10. 5 %. Biomass has 8. 1 %. Solar has got 0. 9 % and lastly, Geoth has got no share in Renewables part of France. he pie charts in the above indicate electricity developed in Germany and France. About all sources and renewable by 2009. Overall, when we take a look, we see both countries have some differentiates. There are ups and downs. Germany Electricity Generation, Conventional Thermal has 59. 6 % of all types in 2009. Ren

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