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The pictures below show the difference in the layout of a conference centre between its present and its future plan.

The pictures below show the difference in the layout of a conference centre between its present and its future plan. JKeY6

The provided maps illustrates the layout of conference centre and its proposed changes for the future. Overview, it can be seen from the maps that some changes will happen to the place to make it more functional. In present, there is a car parking in the east. South of the conference centre is divided into 3 parts. Toilets is on the south west corner. There is a reception left of the toilet. There is a cafe next to the reception towards southeast corner.

The provided maps You should probably use "illustrate".illustrate
illustrates
 the layout of conference Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and its proposed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 for the future. Overview, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the maps that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 will happen to the place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it more functional. In present, there is a car parking in the east. South of the conference Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
is divided
 into 3 parts. Toilets is on the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-westsouthwest
south west
 corner. There is a reception This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the toilet. There is a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
next
 to the reception towards southeast corner. 

IELTS academic The pictures below show the difference in the layout of a conference centre between its present and its future plan.

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

83 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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