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The pictures below show the difference in the layout of a conference centre between its present and its future plan.

The pictures below show the difference in the layout of a conference centre between its present and its future plan. JKeY6
The provided maps illustrates the layout of conference centre and its proposed changes for the future. Overview, it can be seen from the maps that some changes will happen to the place to make it more functional. In present, there is a car parking in the east. South of the conference centre is divided into 3 parts. Toilets is on the south west corner. There is a reception left of the toilet. There is a cafe next to the reception towards southeast corner.
The provided maps
illustrates
the layout of conference
centre
and its proposed
changes
for the future. Overview, it can be
seen
from the maps that
some
changes
will happen to the place to
make
it more functional. In present, there is a car parking in the east. South of the conference
centre
is divided
into 3 parts. Toilets is on the
south west
corner. There is a reception
left
of the toilet. There is a
cafe
next
to the reception towards southeast corner.
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IELTS academic The pictures below show the difference in the layout of a conference centre between its present and its future plan.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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