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Calorie source for UK male at different age groups.

Calorie source for UK male at different age groups. OlKnk

Given is a bar graph focused on displaying the calorie source for UK males at three various age groups 0-24, 25-49 and over 50 years old. Overall, it can be clearly seen that while dairy for 0-24 age group and meat for 25-49 age group are the most important caloric intake, vegetables are permanently the least source of calorie. Looking at the chart in more details, dairy for 0-24 age group show a significantly higher percentage of caloric intake which accounts for approximately 42 per cent. There is no difference between the percentage of meat and vegetables which amount to a fifth. As can be seen from graph, meat for 25-49 age groups is the most significant proportion of calorie source, following by, pulse makes up the lowest contribution, with a half and one in ten per cent. While pulses in the last age group show the biggest share with almost 70 per cent, the figure for vegetables is the lowest with 10 % only.

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 that while dairy for 0-24 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
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 higher percentage of caloric intake which accounts for approximately 42 per cent. There is no difference between the percentage of meat and vegetables which amount to a fifth.

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