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The pie charts represent percentages of three different nutrients in four types of usual meals

The pie charts represent percentages of three different nutrients in four types of usual meals 730Qn
The pie charts represent percentages of three different nutrients in four types of usual meals. These nutrients are sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar consumed by American people in breakfast, lunch, dinner, or snacks. Both sodium and saturated fat have a similar amount of percentage in each meal category. Dinner has the largest percentage for both, followed by lunch taking about a quarter of the chart. Snacks and breakfast shared the same amount percentage on sodium, which is 14 percent. It is, however, significantly different for added sugar as snacks took almost half of the chart by 42 percent. Throughout all three charts, breakfast remains the least meal to contain all three nutrients. In conclusion, American people's breakfast was the healthiest meal since it contains the least amount of unhealthy nutrients. But on the other hand, their dinner was one of the unhealthiest meals as it contains the most sodium and saturated fat compared to other meals.
The pie
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represent
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of three
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different
nutrients in four types of usual
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meals
. These nutrients are sodium, saturated
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fat
, and
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added
sugar consumed by American
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people
in
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breakfast
, lunch, dinner, or snacks.

Both sodium and saturated
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fat
have a similar amount of
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percentage
in each
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meal
category. Dinner has the largest
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percentage
for both, followed by lunch taking about a quarter of the
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chart
. Snacks and
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breakfast
shared the same amount
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percentage
on sodium, which is 14 percent. It is,
however
,
significantly
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different
for
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added
sugar as snacks took almost half of the
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chart
by 42 percent. Throughout all three
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,
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breakfast
remains the least
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meal
to contain all three nutrients.

In conclusion
, American
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's
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breakfast
was the healthiest
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meal
since it contains the least amount of unhealthy nutrients.
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on the other hand
, their dinner was one of the unhealthiest
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meals
as it contains the most sodium and saturated
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fat
compared to other
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meals
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts represent percentages of three different nutrients in four types of usual meals

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