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Bar chart of electricity productions and consumption

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The bar chart illustrates the electricity generated and conusmed by 10 countries in year 2014. These were measured in billion kwh. In China, the production as well as consumption of electricity was the highest in respective year. Whilst minimum usage by Korean. Rep. There was major difference of around 5000 kwh. The producing capacity and used amount in USA was almost identical with a little difference. In other countries, like Germany, Japan, Russia India, Canada and Brazil were placed in ascending order according to their generation. Whatever, they were manufactured that was utilized by them as well. Minimum savage of electricity were seen in these. Overall, utilizing and producing capacity of 10 countries was differ in the amount, where as they were almost identical in the saving pace
The bar chart illustrates the electricity generated and
conusmed
by 10 countries in year 2014. These
were measured
in
billion
kwh
. In China, the production
as well
as consumption of electricity was the highest in respective year. Whilst minimum usage by Korean. Rep. There was major difference of around 5000
kwh
. The producing capacity and
used
amount
in USA
was almost identical with a
little
difference. In other countries, like Germany, Japan, Russia India, Canada and Brazil
were placed
in ascending order according to their generation. Whatever, they
were manufactured
that
was utilized
by them
as well
. Minimum savage of electricity were
seen
in these.
Overall
, utilizing and producing capacity of 10 countries was
differ
in the amount,
where as
they were almost identical in the saving pace
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IELTS academic Bar chart of electricity productions and consumption

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