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Natural process diagram, honey bees

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The flow chart illustrates the natural process of the file cycle of a honey bee. Overall, it takes around 34 to 36 days in the life cycle, beginning with laying eggs of female honey bees, nymph moulting and ending with being a mature one. The process commences with the fact that female honey bees lay one to two eggs every three days. At the next stage, after nine to ten days, the egg hatches and become a nymph. In the process of shedding, there are normally 3 times for the nymph to moult as it grows, which are five days in the first time, seven days in the second time and nine days in the third time after hatching. The final stage of the cycle is when the young adult emerges and become mature honey bee after four days. Having completed all these steps, the life cycle of a honey bee begins again.
The flow chart illustrates the natural process of the file
cycle
of a honey bee.

Overall
, it takes around 34 to 36 days in the life
cycle
, beginning with laying eggs of female honey bees, nymph
moulting
and ending with being a mature one.

The process commences with the fact that female honey bees lay one to two eggs every three days. At the
next
stage, after nine to ten days, the egg hatches and become a nymph. In the process of shedding, there are
normally
3
times
for the nymph to
moult
as it grows, which are five days in the
first
time
, seven days in the second
time
and nine days in the third
time
after hatching.

The final stage of the
cycle
is when the young adult emerges and become mature honey bee after four days. Having completed all these steps, the life
cycle
of a honey bee
begins
again.
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IELTS academic Natural process diagram, honey bees

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4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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