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The table depicts information regarding how many people traveled by three major British airport in half decade period from 1998 to 2003

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The table depicts information regarding how many people traveled by three major British airport in half decade period from 1998 to 2003 Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there dramatical up ward trends in passengers of Getwick and Stansted wheres numbers of visitors in Heathrow airport saw fluctuation. In details with respect to visitors in Getwick airport it went up gradually and considerably year on year in 33 million visitors between in 1998 and 2003. As for rate of Heathrow passengers soured and reached at peak to 48. 2 million between 1998 and 2000. Subsequently despite declining sharply to 33. 2 in 2002 it then saw rapid growth and leveled off at just 45. 6 million in 2003. If you look at Stansted airports there was significant increase under 40 million visitors following this it remained constant with 43. 3 million between 2001 and 2003
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traveled by three major British
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airport
in half decade period from 1998 to 2003

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, what stands out from the graph is that there
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dramatical
up ward trends in passengers of
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Getwick
and
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Stansted
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wheres
numbers of
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visitors
in Heathrow
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airport
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In
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details
with respect to
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visitors
in
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Getwick
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it went up
gradually
and
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year on year
in 33
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million
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visitors
between in 1998 and 2003.

As for rate of Heathrow passengers soured and reached at peak to 48. 2
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between 1998 and 2000.
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Subsequently
despite declining
sharply
to 33. 2 in 2002 it then
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rapid growth and leveled off at
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just
45. 6
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million
in 2003.

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If
you look at
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Stansted
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airports
there was significant increase under 40
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million
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visitors
following this it remained constant with 43. 3
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million
between 2001 and 2003
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IELTS academic The table depicts information regarding how many people traveled by three major British airport in half decade period from 1998 to 2003

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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