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Amount of trash was reprocessed in US during 1960 and 2011

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The line graph illustrates the information regarding the amount of trash was reprocessed in US during 1960 and 2011. The data calibration given in million tons and percentage. It is clear that the rate of garbage recycled in 1960 was 6. 4% but after that it was slightly decrease. In next five years it was arrive on 6. 6% than the rate of trash reuse was slightly increase till 1980. As the same waste recovery rate in million tons was 5. 6 in the year 1960. Afterwards, it was follow the same trend till 1980, but in 1985 it was reach on the point of intersection where the amount of 16. 7 tons and 10. 1%. Proceeding further, after the year 1985 the amount of garbage recycled kept on increasing till 2011 with 86. 9 million tons. The sharp rise comes in percentile rates till 1995 but after that the significant increase exposed till 2011 with 34. 7%.

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