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The graph below shows information about how many people travelled from 1998 to 2003 year period

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The given table demonstrates information regarding, how many people travelled from three big airports in the UK over a half decade period from 1998 to 2003. In general, it is clear from the figures that the travellers from all three airports, namely Heathrow, Gatwick and Stanstand witnessed an upward trend for the whole period in question. Going into details, as regards Gatwick airport, the number of passengers went up gradually and significantly year on year from around 36 millions in 1998 to just under 70 millions in 2003, which meant that it was the most popular airport at that period, with respect to Stanstand, it followed a similar trend, except for the last two years of the period. The figure started just over 17 million in 1998. Subsequently, having soared to approximately 43 millions in 2001, the figure the remained stable and finished at the same figure in 2003. By contrast, Heathrow experienced slightly different trend. Having started at just above 27 millions in 1998, the number of passengers then surged by around 21 million reaching its peak at approximately 48 million in 2000. This was followed by a period of decline to 33 million until 2002. Finally, the figure saw a rapid growth and finished at around 45 million in 2003
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table demonstrates information regarding, how
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many
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people
travelled from three
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big
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airports
in the UK over a half decade
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period
from 1998 to 2003.

In general
, it is
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clear
from the
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figures
that the
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travellers
from all three
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airports
,
namely
Heathrow, Gatwick and
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Stanstand
witnessed an upward trend for the whole
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in question.

Going into
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, as regards Gatwick
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, the number of passengers went up
gradually
and
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year on year
from around 36
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millions
in 1998 to
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under 70
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millions
in 2003, which meant that it was the most popular
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airport
at that
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period
, with respect to
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Stanstand
, it followed a similar trend,
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except for
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. The
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figure
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started
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over 17
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million
in 1998.
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, having soared to approximately 43
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millions
in 2001, the
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the remained stable and finished at the same
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in 2003.

By contrast, Heathrow experienced
slightly
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trend. Having
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started
at
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just
above 27
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millions
in 1998, the number of passengers then surged by around 21
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reaching its peak at approximately 48
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million
in 2000. This
was followed
by a
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period
of decline to 33
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million
until 2002.
Finally
, the
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a rapid growth and finished at around 45
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in 2003
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