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The pie charts provide data on the ages of the populations of Yemen and ITALY in 2000 and projections for 2050

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According to the pie charts, 0-14 ages grew 50, 1 per cent in YEMEN the ages of populations in 2000 and 0-14 ages will fail to 37. 0 per cent in ITALY in 2050 the percentage of ages. And 15-59 ages made up to 46, 3 per cent in YEMEN in 2000. And in ITALY will grow to 57, 3 per cent in 2050. Finally, 60+ ages made up to 3, 6 per cent considerably in YEMEN, in ITALY will make up to 5, 7 per cent in 2050. Let's see next pie chart, 0-14 ages grew to 14, 3 per cent in YEMEN and in ITALY will fail to 11, 5 per cent in 2050, and next age, 15-59 ages grew considerably to 61, 6 per cent in YEMEN in 2000 and in ITALY will make up 46, 2 per cent in 2050 and last age 60+ ages made up to 24, 1 per cent in YEMEN in 2000 and in ITALY will make up to 42, 3 per cent in 2050. All in All, the highest percentage of ages of the population in YEMEN in 2000 then ITALY the percentage of ages of the population in 2050
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made up to 46, 3 per cent in YEMEN in 2000. And in ITALY will grow to 57, 3 per cent in 2050.
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of the population in YEMEN in 2000 then ITALY the percentage of
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IELTS academic The pie charts provide data on the ages of the populations of Yemen and ITALY in 2000 and projections for 2050

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