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The graph illustrates the amount of money that graduates and non-graduates of both sexes earn per week in average

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The graph illustrates the amount of money that graduates and non-graduates of both sexes earn per week in average. As ca be seen from the graph is that the figures for man was a upward trend in its figures, a reverse pattern was less interested. According to the graph, the figures for man start at 350$ from 20-24 years old which is the lowest level. This number experience a significatly increased at the highest level of over 700$ between 50-59 years old. Up to 200$ of male non-graduates is earn from 16 to 19 years old which is the lowest level. There were a considerable increase at nearly 600$ in the number of male non-graduates which is the same age from 50 to 59 years old.
The graph illustrates the amount of money that graduates and non-graduates of both sexes earn per week in average. As ca be
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between 50-59 years
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200$
of male non-graduates is
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which is the lowest level. There were a considerable increase at
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in the number of male non-graduates which is the same age from 50 to 59 years
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