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The diagram shows the process of recycling glass bottles

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The diagram illustrates how to recycled glass bottles. Overall, there are essential three phases, beginning with collecting bottles and ending with ready bottles are transferred to customer supermarket by truck. In the first stage is that bottles are collected onto the bins. And the second stage is that collected bottles has been cleaned with water and then they are painted with different colours including, brown, green, and clear. Following this, recycled plant are transferred to the furmace and then they are divided two various module; recycled liquid glass and new liquid glass. The next phase is that new liquid glass has been transferred to supermarket by truck.
The diagram illustrates how to recycled
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glass
bottles.

Overall
, there are essential three phases, beginning with collecting
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bottles
and ending with ready
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bottles
are transferred
to customer supermarket by truck.

In the
first
stage is that
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bottles
are collected
onto the bins. And the second stage is that collected
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bottles
has
been cleaned
with
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water and
then they
are painted
with
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different
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colours
including, brown, green, and
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clear
.

Following this, recycled plant
are transferred
to the
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furmace and
then they
are divided
two various
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module
; recycled liquid
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glass
and new liquid
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glass
. The
next
phase is that new liquid
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glass
has
been transferred
to supermarket by truck.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the process of recycling glass bottles

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4 paragraphs
107 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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