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The two pictures represent how the bookshop was two decades ago and present.

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The two pictures represent how the bookshop was two decades ago and present. Overall, it can be seen that, the structure of the bookstore has been changed significantly also many features have been shifted and modified in the bookshop. The analysis of the maps show that, the position of travel, new books and service desk has not been altered till today. Similarly entrance gate has been remained at the same place. There was a fiction book section in northeast corner in 2000 which is replaced by non-fiction while the non-fiction department has been converted into a café. In 2000, there was a big space provided to the fiction books in north side which is divided into four parts ranging from art, hobbies, cookery to fiction. There were art, hobbies and cookery in the central/middle/centre area of the store that have been replaced by the three tables with twelve chairs for visitors.
The two pictures represent how the bookshop was two decades ago and present.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that, the structure of the bookstore has been
changed
significantly
also
many
features have
been shifted
and modified in the bookshop.

The analysis of the maps
show
that, the position of travel, new books and service desk has not
been altered
till
today
.
Similarly
entrance gate has
been remained
at the same place. There was a fiction book section in northeast corner in 2000 which
is replaced
by non-fiction while the non-fiction department has
been converted
into a café. In 2000, there was a
big
space provided to the fiction books in north side which
is divided
into four parts ranging from art, hobbies, cookery to fiction. There were art, hobbies and cookery in the central/middle/
centre
area of the store that have
been replaced
by the three tables with twelve chairs for visitors.
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IELTS academic The two pictures represent how the bookshop was two decades ago and present.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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