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the chart below show information about how people age 24 to 24 are housed in UK

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The bar graph compares statistics about how the folks are resided in 2 different of platforms, homeowners and occupant, from aged 24 to 34 in UK. Overall, it is clearly that the proportion of homeowners has decreased rapidly. By the constant, the amount of residents crowds have considerable increased during 10 years. In 2004, the percentage of society as a renter which reach above 20% and clearly moderated go up in 2014, while in 2006 and 2012, there was a slow decline. Occupant became more popular, which the number of them fairly accurate to 50%. In the same year, the number of homeowners reach 60% in 2004 nonetheless it has decreased steadily from 2004 to 2006, while in 2007 has increased slightly. Moreover, the percentage of homeowners have plunge significantly from 2007 to 2011. From that year to 2012 has remained constantly. At last, in 2014, the ratio of homeowners which were about 35 %.
The bar graph compares statistics about how the folks
are resided
in 2
different
of platforms, homeowners and occupant, from aged 24 to 34 in UK.

Overall
, it is
clearly
that the proportion of homeowners has decreased
rapidly
. By the constant, the amount of residents crowds have considerable increased during 10 years.

In 2004, the percentage of society as a renter which reach above 20% and
clearly
moderated go up in 2014, while in 2006 and 2012, there was a slow decline. Occupant became more popular, which the number of them
fairly
accurate to 50%.

In the same year, the number of homeowners reach 60% in 2004 nonetheless it has decreased
steadily
from 2004 to 2006, while in 2007 has increased
slightly
.
Moreover
, the percentage of homeowners have plunge
significantly
from 2007 to 2011. From that year to 2012 has remained
constantly
. At last, in 2014, the ratio of homeowners which were about 35 %.
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