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The charts given above are namely ‘reasons for study according to age’ and ‘employer support’ respectively. The first graph explicitly shows that as the age of a student increases, career-centric studying gradually decreases. It can be seen that at the age of 26, around 80% of students are into studying with an aim to flourish in their respective careers and as they age over 49, the career-centric approach gradually mutates into an interest-centric approach. We can also observe that in the 40’s range [40-49], both career and interest-centric graphs are at the same level, showing a balanced approach towards studying. According to the second graph, the lowest employer support is granted to the age group of 30-39 years old, approximately around 30-35%. In contrast, the peak of the graph that represents the highest support is at age 26 and below, figuratively around 60-65%. The general trend of this graph is not regular, first with an increase in age the support decreases and later after hitting the lowest point at around the secondary adult phase, it increases with age over 49.

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