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The pie charts illustrates the proportion of contamination creating from air,litter,farm waste ,marine, offshore oil and domestic sewage the part of ocean .

The pie charts illustrates the proportion of contamination creating from air, litter, farm waste, marine, offshore oil and domestic sewage the part of ocean. gAAxl
Overall the maximum contaminant entering from air and Marine in 1997. the minimum percentage of pollutants from industrial waste and domestic sewage in 1997. the maximum percentage of impurity from air and domestic sewage in 2007. In 2007 the minimum proportion of marine and offshore oil. In 1997 the maximum percentage of pollutants go in for from air 30 percent and Marine 22 percent. The minimum proportion of industrial waste 17 percent as well as domestic sewage 18 percent in 1997. In 1997 less impurity creating far from farm waste, littre and offshore oil is 4 percent
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the maximum contaminant entering from air and Marine in 1997.
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minimum percentage of pollutants from industrial waste and domestic sewage in 1997.
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maximum percentage of impurity from air and domestic sewage in 2007. In 2007 the minimum proportion of marine and offshore oil. In 1997 the maximum percentage of pollutants go in for from air 30
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and Marine 22
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. The minimum proportion of industrial waste 17
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as well
as domestic sewage 18
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in 1997. In 1997 less impurity creating far from farm waste,
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and offshore oil is 4
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrates the proportion of contamination creating from air, litter, farm waste, marine, offshore oil and domestic sewage the part of ocean.

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