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The line graph demonstrates the numbers of population from various parts of the world in Australia during the given time frame.

The line graph demonstrates the numbers of population from various parts of the world in Australia during the given time frame. YRRdm
The line graph demonstrates the numbers of population from various parts of the world in Australia during the given time frame. Overall, the figure for UK citizens witnessed a huge drop while those from Asia and other nations saw an upward trend. Another interesting fact is that around 1991, the numbers for three regions almost met at one point. In 1976, the population from other countries were almost 5 million above those who came from Asia. From 1976 to 1986, the numbers of people came from Asia rose rapidly while those from other countries saw a light decrease. In 1986, Asian population surpassed others in Australia for the first time until it got back to its place after 10 years. After being the lowest population in 1991, other countries residents rocketed from under 10 million to approximate 15 million people in 2006 after 15 years. Similarly, Asian dwellers soared speedily after 2006 and overcame other countries citizens again and became the most popular type of people in Australia in 2011. On the other hand, UK suffered a huge decline during the period of 1976 to 2011. Before 1991, UK residents was more popular than Asia and other countries people. While other countries and Asia population experienced an upward trend, UK population were decrease and being surpassed by them after 1991. 20 years later, only around 5 million British still remain in Australia.
The line graph demonstrates the numbers of
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from various parts of the world in Australia during the
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, the figure for UK citizens witnessed a huge drop while those from Asia and
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other
nations
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an upward trend. Another interesting fact is that around 1991, the numbers for three regions almost met at one point.

In 1976, the
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population
from
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other
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countries
were almost 5
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million
above those who came from Asia. From 1976 to 1986, the numbers of
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people
came from Asia rose
rapidly
while those from
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other
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countries
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saw
a light decrease. In 1986, Asian
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population
surpassed others in Australia for the
first
time until it
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got
back to its place after 10 years. After being the lowest
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population
in 1991,
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other
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countries
residents rocketed from under 10
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million
to approximate 15
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people
in 2006 after 15 years.
Similarly
, Asian dwellers soared
speedily
after 2006 and overcame
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other
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citizens again and became the most popular type of
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people
in Australia in 2011.

On the
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hand, UK suffered a huge decline during the period of 1976 to 2011.
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1991, UK residents was more popular than Asia and
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countries
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people
. While
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other
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countries
and Asia
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population
experienced an upward trend, UK
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were
decrease and
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by them after 1991. 20 years later,
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British
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remain in Australia.
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IELTS academic The line graph demonstrates the numbers of population from various parts of the world in Australia during the given time frame.

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