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The pie chart presenting the number of hours spent by undergraduates,postgraduates and the total student in a British university library

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The pie chart presenting the number of hours spent by undergraduates, postgraduates and the total student in a British university library In chart there are most of all students and the undergraduates spent 1-7 hours, showing the percentage of 50 and 63 respectively. On the other hand 33 percent both categories students spent 8-14 hours in library but fewer of this duo category spent more than 15 or more hours. The statistics is shocking about postgraduates, 51 percent of students spent more than 15 hours in library. Average 25 percent of postgraduates spent 1-14 hours in library. Overall many students spent 1-7 hours in library but the trends is changed for the postgraduates.
The pie chart presenting the number of
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by undergraduates,
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postgraduates
and the total
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student
in a British university library

In chart there are most of all
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students
and the undergraduates
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spent
1-7
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hours
, showing the percentage of 50 and 63
respectively
.
On the other hand
33 percent both categories
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students
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spent
8-14
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hours
in library
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fewer of this duo category
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spent
more than 15 or more hours.

The statistics is shocking about
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postgraduates
, 51 percent of
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students
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spent
more than 15
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hours
in library. Average 25 percent of
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postgraduates
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spent
1-14
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hours
in library.

Overall
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many
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students
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spent
1-7
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hours
in library
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but
the trends is
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IELTS academic The pie chart presenting the number of hours spent by undergraduates, postgraduates and the total student in a British university library

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