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The chart below shows the growth in the population of some of the world's largest cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the growth in the population of some of the world's largest cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. O66R3

The given bar graph illustrates the growing population of 5 different cities around the world in 1970, 1990 and 2015 while the table figureouts the population of top five cities in 1950 and 2010. Also, the line graph depict the rural and urban population 9ver a world from 1980 to 2010. It is evident from the graph that in 1970, the population in Jakarta was 3 millions. As well, the population of people in Bombay, Shanghai, New York and Tokyo rose gradually and reached upto 16 millions in 1970. However, in 1990 the population of people in Jakarta was 9. 5 millions while the population in Bombay, Shanghai and New York rose only slightly from 3 millions to 15. 5 millions. Also, the highest growth rate occurred on Tokyo compared to other cities where the population of people reached to 24 millions I 1990 and 29 millions in 2015. Although, there was a reduction in the population of people by 13 millions from Tokyo's population in New York during 2015. Even so, in the same year the growth rate in Shanghai was 20. 2 millions and 26. 6 millions in Bombay but there was a decline in population of people by 7. 1 millions from Bombay 's population in Jakarta. Furthermore, the table outlines that in 2010 the highest population seemed to be 27. 6 millions which was occurred in Tokyo compared to other given big cities while before 60 years in the same city the population of people was 6. 5 millions. Nonetheless, the population of people in given cities during 1950 was found to be less as compared to that of in 2010 where the population of people in all given b cities was above 20 millions. Moreover, the line graph reveals that the rural population of people over a world in 1980 was 3 billions whereas the urban population was found to be 1. 8 billions. Likewise, there was a slight growth in the population of people of those who lived to rural areas from 3 billions to 3. 2 billions in 1990. While, the world population in urban areas was at 2 billions in 1990 which was almost double in 2010 whereas the rural population was steady and reached to 3. 3 billions. From the given bar graph and table, it can be estimated that the population of people in Tokyo kept on increasing and it is clear from the line graph that the world population in urban areas also increased day by day compared to the population of people in rural areas.

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