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The pie charts illustrate the value on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the globe and finally how the population is distributed. To begin, the first graph shows the World Spending, "Others" has the highest value with 40%, while Food with 24%, Transport 18%, housing 12% and finally clothing with 6%. For what concerns the distribution of World population, the pie chart illustrates Asia with the biggest slice with 57%, Europe with 14%, America 14%, Africa 10% and finally others with 5%. The last pie chart shows Consumption of Resources, USA and Europe have the highest value of consumption with 60% while other with 40%. To summarize, it is clear that countries spend money on others that are not specified in the pie chart. The world population is distributed in prevalence with 57% in Asia and finally USA and Europa consumption more that other countries.

The pie charts illustrate the value on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the globe and finally how the population is distributed. To begin, the first graph shows the World Spending, "Others" has the highest value with 40%, while Food with 24%, Transport 18%, housing 12% and finally clothing with 6%. For what concerns the distribution of World population, the pie chart illustrates Asia with the biggest slice with 57%, Europe with 14%, America 14%, Africa 10% and finally others with 5%. The last pie chart shows Consumption of Resources, USA and Europe have the highest value of consumption with 60% while other with 40%. To summarize, it is clear that countries spend money on others that are not specified in the pie chart. The world population is distributed in prevalence with 57% in Asia and finally USA and Europa consumption more that other countries. xnnb
The pie charts illustrate the value on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the globe and finally how the population is distributed. To begin, the first graph shows the World Spending, "Others" has the highest value with 40%, while Food with 24%, Transport 18%, housing 12% and finally clothing with 6%. For what concerns the distribution of World population, the pie chart illustrates Asia with the biggest slice with 57%, Europe with 14%, America 14%, Africa 10% and finally others with 5%. The last pie chart shows Consumption of Resources, USA and Europe have the highest value of consumption with 60% while other with 40%. To summarize, it is clear that countries spend money on others that are not specified in the pie chart. The world population is distributed in prevalence with 57% in Asia and finally USA and Europa consumption more that other countries.
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the value on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the globe and finally how the population is distributed. To begin, the first graph shows the World Spending, "Others" has the highest value with 40%, while Food with 24%, Transport 18%, housing 12% and finally clothing with 6%. For what concerns the distribution of World population, the pie chart illustrates Asia with the biggest slice with 57%, Europe with 14%, America 14%, Africa 10% and finally others with 5%. The last pie chart shows Consumption of Resources, USA and Europe have the highest value of consumption with 60% while other with 40%. To summarize, it is clear that countries spend money on others that are not specified in the pie chart. The world population is distributed in prevalence with 57% in Asia and finally USA and Europa consumption more that other countries.

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