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The charts illustrate air pollution levels by different reasons among four countries in 2021.

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The charts illustrate air pollution levels by different reasons among four countries in 2021. The parameters that it analyzes are Electricity generation, Transport, Industry while the countries are China, America, Japan, and Australia. PPM is from 0 to 90. To begin, the principal cause of air pollution in China is caused by Industry with the value of 80 PPM than Transport and finally electricity generation. About America, the principal cause of pollution is by Transport that reaches almost 60 PPM, and then there are Electricity and Industry that their value of PPM is very close. Japan, has the lowest value of pollution caused by electricity generation, while transport has the value of 30 PPM and industry is over the value of 40 PPM. In Australia, no values go over 30 PPM, the biggest value in Australia but one of the smallest in all charts is Electricity generation that reaches almost 30 PPM, and then there are Transport and Industry. To summarize, It is clear that China is the country with the most pollution on the charts. America is characterized by big pollution caused by transport, Japan has a good value of electricity generation and finally, Australia has balanced values.
The charts illustrate air
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pollution
levels by
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different
reasons among four countries in 2021.

The parameters that it analyzes are
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Electricity
generation,
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Transport
,
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Industry
while the countries are China, America, Japan, and Australia.

PPM is from 0 to 90.

To
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begin
, the principal cause of air
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pollution
in China
is caused
by
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Industry
with the
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value
of 80 PPM than
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Transport
and
finally
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electricity
generation.

About America, the principal cause of
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pollution
is by
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Transport
that reaches almost 60 PPM, and then there are
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Electricity
and
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Industry
that their
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value
of PPM is
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very
close.

Japan, has the lowest
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value
of
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pollution
caused by
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electricity
generation, while
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transport
has the
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value
of 30 PPM and
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industry
is over the
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value
of 40 PPM.

In Australia, no values go over 30 PPM, the biggest
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value
in Australia
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but
one of the smallest in all charts is
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Electricity
generation that reaches almost 30 PPM, and then there are
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Transport
and Industry.

To summarize
, It is
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clear
that China is the country with the most
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pollution
on the charts. America
is characterized
by
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big
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pollution
caused by
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transport
, Japan has a
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good
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value
of
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electricity
generation and
finally
, Australia has balanced values.
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IELTS academic The charts illustrate air pollution levels by different reasons among four countries in 2021.

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